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BrokenBeneath the crying tears,
Beyond the bruised ego,
Is a girl, who's just like me.
Fragile as always,
Broken so many times.
No glue can save her,
Only she can save herself.
She will move on eventually.
Heart strong as ever,
She'll beat them all,
Love the loved,
And hate the hated.
Deep down beneath it all,
The girl so broken,
Is just like me.

BrokenMy wounds wont heal
I scream into the darkness
no emotions inside left to feel
just when I thought I could trust you

BrokenThese needles and pills,
They give me the thrills,
That life won't give me,
They set me free
These lines on my skin,
Look like rivers from within,
Filled with all my pain,
And they are singing!

I juggle razorblades!
Just like knives!
The only thing on my mind...!
Is how to get out of this life!

I am broken!
Full of nothing but misery!
I am so broken!
And every piece that breaks away,
Is a little piece of me!
Broken in body!
Broken in mind...!
Broken in every way,
But somehow still alive...

I can see the faces,
But I can't remember the names,
Life is nothing more,
Than a pain induced haze
My head feels like,
It's goi

Roses and Razor bladesRoses and razor blades
Our love shall never fade away
Blood drips from our clasped hands
This gothic romance shall forever last
Sweet death glazes over our eyes and souls
Death shall never part us, my love

BrokenI don't know why they call it a broken heart, because it's not, really.

It's more like your heart is trying to break apart, but it never really succeeds.

It's like it's literally trying to pull itself into two, and struggling to function correctly in the process.

And oh, it hurts.

If you've never had a broken heart you won't understand, you probably think it's an emotional thing, like it's all in the mind.

But it's so much more than that.

It's a physical ache in your chest, a painful whine that just doesn't quit.

It's a kind of pressure, compacting your whole chest area and making everything inside hurt.

Then it rises, it forces its w

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by ~ChetzB, Mar 15, 2009, 9:51:09 AM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Urban & Spoken Word

Broken wings,
Make it impossible to fly.

Broken dreams,
Make it impossible to die.

Broken promises,
Make it impossible to trust.

A broken heart,
Makes it impossible to love.

Broken..by ~ChetzB

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Urban & Spoken Word

Broken indeed.

love 3 3

joy 1 1

~~wow 0 0~~

~~mad 0 0~~

sad 4 4

~~fear 0 0~~

~~neutral 0 0~~

~x-sayrie-x Sep 3, 2012

_{I think that it'll sound better if you take out the 'feel' in the last sentence. It messes up the rhythm of the poem. Otherwise, I really love it <3}

~ChetzB Sep 4, 2012

You're quite right there. Thank you for that suggestion <3

~ShineSonic07 Mar 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

So true, specially on the last 2 lines.
I've been abandoned 3/5 heartbreaks
and betrayed 1/5 heartbreaks.
I'm too hurt to love now...

Very touching poem.

~ChetzB Mar 24, 2012

Given time, we heal ourselves. It will all make sense and get better eventually.

~ShineSonic07 Mar 24, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Idk how I can heal 5 heartbreaks that have left my heart lifeless.
I hope you're right...I cant take another heartbreak,

If I get another one, Its inevitable that I'll be emo..

~ChetzB Mar 25, 2012

It's just a case of meeting the right person at the right time. I know it sounds cliche, but it's the truth.
Just keep your chin up, you'll be okay

~ShineSonic07 Mar 25, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I hope so...Though it might happen too late.

~ChetzB Mar 25, 2012

Well you seem pretty young still. Trust me, it gets better over time. You just need to tough it out, surround yourself friends, family and close ones. ^^

~ShineSonic07 Mar 25, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

How can you tell. Alright, I will.

~NykiiLynn Mar 20, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

i love the whole thing minus the last line.

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